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Here is some of Room 12's writing about the Swimming Sports and how we felt!
We were focusing on using adverbs and adjectives to add interest to our writing.
Grace
As I streamed through the water I could hear the crowds cheers ringing in my ears. I stared down at the clear rippling water as I dived down into it. The smell of chlorine sifted through my nostrils as I prepared to dive. Light blue water pushed around my fingers as I pulled my way through across it to the finish line. A small splash sounded behind me as I broke the surface for a breath. Hot sun shone on my back as I pulled myself through the water. Cheers erupted throughout the pool as I dived into the water. My heart pounded as I stepped up onto the side of the pool.
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